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IELTS Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution · health

In many countries, the number of overweight children is increasing. What are the reasons for this, and what can be done to solve the problem?

Write at least 250 words · 40 minutes

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Ideas to get you started

  • More screen time and less outdoor activity
  • Cheap processed food and sugary drinks
  • Healthy school meals and daily physical education

A plan for this question

  1. Introduction: paraphrase the problem and preview your answer: less activity and unhealthy diets are the causes; schools, governments and parents can each help.
  2. Body 1 (reasons): screen time instead of outdoor play, being driven instead of walking; cheap processed food and sugary drinks, little time to cook.
  3. Body 2 (solutions): healthy school meals and daily activity; taxes on sugary drinks and limits on junk food advertising; screen limits and family exercise.
  4. Conclusion: sum up the causes and the combined solution.

Model essay

266 words

The number of overweight children is rising in many parts of the world, which puts their health at serious risk. This essay will argue that the main causes are less physical activity and unhealthy diets, and that schools, governments and parents all have a part to play in solving the problem.

The first major cause is that children move far less than previous generations did. Much of their free time is now spent in front of screens, playing video games or watching videos, rather than playing outside. In many cities, parents also feel that the streets are unsafe, so children are driven to school instead of walking or cycling. The second cause is diet. Processed food and sugary drinks are cheap, heavily advertised and available everywhere, while busy parents often have little time to cook fresh meals. As a result, many children take in far more calories than they use.

Several measures could reverse this trend. Schools could provide healthy meals and make sure that every child is active each day, whether through sport, dance or simply active breaks between lessons. Governments could tax sugary drinks, as a number of countries have done, and restrict the advertising of junk food during children’s programmes. Finally, parents can help by setting limits on screen time and by making exercise a family habit, for example by walking or cycling together at weekends.

In conclusion, childhood obesity is mainly caused by inactive lifestyles and cheap, unhealthy food. Healthy school meals, daily exercise, government action on sugary drinks and advertising, and support from parents would together help children grow up healthier.

Written by Acedmi to show what a high-band essay looks like. It is not an official IELTS sample, and your own ideas can be different.

Useful vocabulary

overweight / obese
Heavier than is healthy / very overweight.
“More children are overweight than ten years ago.”
sedentary
Involving a lot of sitting and little movement.
“Many children now have sedentary lifestyles.”
processed food
Food made in factories, often with added fat, salt and sugar.
“Processed food is cheap and easy to find.”
calorie intake
The amount of energy you get from food.
“Sugary drinks increase calorie intake.”
physical education (PE)
Sport and exercise taught at school.
“Every child should have daily physical education.”
reverse a trend
Make something go in the opposite direction.
“Healthy school meals could help reverse the trend.”
restrict
Limit.
“The government could restrict junk food advertising.”
a part to play
A role in solving something.
“Parents also have a part to play.”

Common mistakes

  • Blaming only one group, such as parents. Strong answers show several causes and several solutions.
  • Using "fat" in academic writing. It can sound rude; use "overweight", "obese" or "unhealthy weight".
  • Solutions that do not match the causes. If screen time is a cause, one solution should limit it.

What the examiner marks

Four criteria, equally weighted: Task Response (answer every part of the question with a clear position), Coherence and Cohesion (logical paragraphs and linking), Lexical Resource (range and accuracy of vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. An essay under 250 words loses marks for Task Response.