Write at least 250 words · 40 minutes
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Ideas to get you started
- Harm to sea animals and the food chain
- Charges or bans on single-use plastic items
- Better recycling systems and public awareness campaigns
A plan for this question
- Introduction: paraphrase the issue and preview your answer: plastic harms sea life and enters the human food chain; it can be reduced by limiting single-use plastic and improving waste collection.
- Body 1 (problems): animals swallow plastic or get trapped in it; microplastics pass up the food chain to people; dirty beaches hurt tourism and fishing.
- Body 2 (solutions): charges or bans on single-use items, deposit-return schemes for bottles, better rubbish collection near coasts, awareness campaigns. Say how each one helps.
- Conclusion: sum up the problems and the measures.
Model essay
276 words
Every year, millions of tonnes of plastic waste find their way into the world's oceans. This essay will explain how this pollution harms both sea life and people, and suggest that limiting single-use plastic and improving waste collection are the best ways to reduce it.
The most visible problem is the harm to marine animals. Turtles, seabirds and whales often mistake plastic bags and fragments for food, and the plastic blocks their stomachs, while other animals become trapped in old fishing nets and drown. The damage does not stop there. Over time, plastic breaks down into tiny pieces known as microplastics, which are eaten by small fish and passed up the food chain, so they can end up on our own plates. In addition, plastic washed up on beaches spoils coastlines, which hurts tourism and the incomes of fishing communities.
Fortunately, there are practical solutions. Governments can charge for or ban the single-use items that make up much of the waste, such as carrier bags, straws and disposable cutlery; charges for plastic bags have sharply reduced their use in many countries. Deposit-return schemes, in which customers get money back when they return bottles, give people a direct reason to recycle. Since a large share of ocean plastic comes from places with poor rubbish collection, investment in waste management in coastal areas would also stop plastic before it reaches rivers and the sea. Finally, education campaigns can encourage people to carry reusable bags and bottles.
In conclusion, plastic in the sea injures wildlife, enters the human food chain and damages coastal economies. Reducing single-use plastic, rewarding recycling and improving waste collection would together make a significant difference.
Written by Acedmi to show what a high-band essay looks like. It is not an official IELTS sample, and your own ideas can be different.
Useful vocabulary
- marine life
- Animals and plants that live in the sea.
- “Plastic waste is a serious threat to marine life.”
- single-use plastic
- Plastic that is thrown away after being used once.
- “Straws and carrier bags are common single-use plastics.”
- microplastics
- Tiny pieces of plastic, smaller than 5 millimetres.
- “Microplastics have been found in fish and in drinking water.”
- food chain
- The order in which living things eat one another.
- “Plastic eaten by small fish moves up the food chain.”
- deposit-return scheme
- A system where you pay a little extra for a bottle and get it back when you return the bottle.
- “A deposit-return scheme raised bottle recycling rates.”
- waste management
- Collecting, recycling and getting rid of rubbish.
- “Poor waste management lets plastic reach the rivers.”
- biodegradable
- Able to break down naturally.
- “Paper straws are biodegradable, unlike plastic ones.”
- raise awareness
- Help people understand a problem.
- “Beach clean-ups raise awareness of plastic pollution.”
Common mistakes
- Writing about pollution in general. Keep to plastic in the sea; air pollution or climate change are off topic here.
- Giving solutions with no explanation. Say how each measure would cut the waste, as the model does with deposit-return schemes.
- Repeating the word "plastic" in every sentence. Vary it with "plastic waste", "rubbish", "debris" and "single-use items".
What the examiner marks
Four criteria, equally weighted: Task Response (answer every part of the question with a clear position), Coherence and Cohesion (logical paragraphs and linking), Lexical Resource (range and accuracy of vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. An essay under 250 words loses marks for Task Response.