Write at least 250 words · 40 minutes
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Ideas to get you started
- Delayed independence and long commutes
- Building more affordable homes near transport links
- Support schemes for first-time buyers and renters
A plan for this question
- Introduction: paraphrase the situation and preview your answer: it causes problems, and building affordable homes plus support schemes would help.
- Body 1 (problems): delayed independence and living with parents; renters cannot save; long commutes from cheaper areas; cities lose young talent.
- Body 2 (solutions): more small, affordable homes near stations; a share of affordable homes in new projects; help with deposits and limits on rent rises.
- Conclusion: sum up the problems and the solutions.
Model essay
271 words
In many cities, rising property prices and rents mean that young adults cannot afford a home of their own. This essay will discuss the problems this causes and suggest that building more affordable homes and supporting first-time buyers and renters would help.
The first problem is delayed independence. Many young people have to keep living with their parents well into their twenties or thirties, which can cause tension at home and delay decisions such as marriage and starting a family. Those who do rent often spend so much of their income on housing that they cannot save. Another problem is long commuting. Young workers who cannot afford to live near their jobs are pushed to cheaper areas far from the centre, so they spend hours travelling each day, which is tiring and expensive. In the long term, cities may also lose young talent, as graduates move to places where housing is cheaper.
Several solutions could ease the situation. The most important is to build more homes, particularly smaller, affordable flats near railway and metro stations, so that young people can live within easy reach of their work. Governments could also require developers to include a proportion of affordable homes in every new project. In addition, support schemes, such as smaller deposits or low-interest loans for first-time buyers, and limits on how quickly rents can rise would make housing more accessible for young adults.
In conclusion, unaffordable housing delays young people’s independence, increases commuting and can drive talent away from cities. Building more affordable homes near transport links, together with financial support for first-time buyers and renters, offers the most realistic solution.
Written by Acedmi to show what a high-band essay looks like. It is not an official IELTS sample, and your own ideas can be different.
Useful vocabulary
- affordable
- Cheap enough for people on normal incomes.
- “The city needs more affordable flats.”
- property prices
- The cost of buying homes and land.
- “Property prices have doubled in ten years.”
- first-time buyer
- Someone buying a home for the first time.
- “First-time buyers struggle to save a deposit.”
- deposit
- The first part of the price, paid before a loan covers the rest.
- “A smaller deposit would help young buyers.”
- developer
- A company that builds new homes or offices.
- “Developers must include affordable homes.”
- within easy reach
- Close enough to get to easily.
- “Homes should be within easy reach of stations.”
- independence
- Living without help from your parents.
- “High rents delay young people’s independence.”
- drive away
- Make people leave.
- “High costs drive young talent away.”
Common mistakes
- Explaining causes when the question asks for problems. Describe the effects on young people, not why prices are high.
- Using "houses" for everything. "Housing" is uncountable and means homes in general.
- Solutions with no detail. Say who should do what, such as developers including affordable homes.
What the examiner marks
Four criteria, equally weighted: Task Response (answer every part of the question with a clear position), Coherence and Cohesion (logical paragraphs and linking), Lexical Resource (range and accuracy of vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. An essay under 250 words loses marks for Task Response.