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IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages · consumerism

More and more people now buy clothes, books and groceries online instead of visiting shops. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Write at least 250 words · 40 minutes

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Ideas to get you started

  • Convenience, wider choice and easy price comparison
  • Local shops close and town centres become empty
  • More packaging and delivery traffic

A plan for this question

  1. Introduction: paraphrase the trend and answer the question: the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
  2. Body 1 (disadvantages): local shops close, town centres lose life and jobs; more packaging and delivery traffic.
  3. Body 2 (advantages, and why they weigh more): time saved, help for busy, elderly and disabled people, wider choice, easy price comparison; the problems can be reduced.
  4. Conclusion: say again which side is greater, using "on balance".

Model essay

269 words

Shopping habits have changed dramatically, and many people now order their clothes, books and groceries online rather than visiting shops. Although this trend has some serious drawbacks, I believe the advantages outweigh them.

The main disadvantages affect town centres and the environment. As more people shop online, many local shops lose customers and are forced to close, leaving empty premises and fewer jobs on the high street. This also removes a place where people meet and socialise, which can make town centres feel lifeless. For many older residents, the closure of a familiar local shop is a real loss. In addition, online orders often arrive in large amounts of packaging, and the vans delivering individual parcels to every street add to traffic and pollution.

However, the benefits are considerable and affect almost everyone. Online shopping saves time, since people can order at any hour without travelling or queuing, which is especially valuable for busy workers, parents with young children, and elderly or disabled people who find it hard to get to shops. It also offers a far wider choice than any single shop, and comparison websites allow customers to find the best price in minutes. Furthermore, some of the disadvantages can be reduced: many retailers are using less packaging, delivery companies are switching to electric vans, and town centres can reinvent themselves with cafés, services and events that cannot be bought online.

In conclusion, while online shopping harms some local businesses and creates more packaging and delivery traffic, its convenience, choice and accessibility benefit a far larger number of people. On balance, I believe this is a positive development.

Written by Acedmi to show what a high-band essay looks like. It is not an official IELTS sample, and your own ideas can be different.

Useful vocabulary

high street
The main shopping street of a town.
“Several shops on the high street have closed.”
retailer
A business that sells goods to the public.
“Retailers are cutting their packaging.”
convenience
Being easy and saving time.
“The main appeal of online shopping is convenience.”
premises
The building a business uses.
“Empty premises make the town look neglected.”
accessibility
How easy something is for everyone to use, including disabled people.
“Online shopping improves accessibility for elderly people.”
reinvent itself
Change completely to succeed in a new way.
“The town centre reinvented itself with cafés and events.”
drawback
A disadvantage.
“Delivery traffic is a major drawback.”
on balance
After considering both sides.
“On balance, the trend is positive.”

Common mistakes

  • Not saying which side is greater. An "outweigh" question needs a clear answer.
  • Developing only one side. Give the disadvantages a real paragraph, even if you think the advantages win.
  • Repeating "online shopping" in every sentence. Vary it: buying online, e-commerce, internet shopping.

What the examiner marks

Four criteria, equally weighted: Task Response (answer every part of the question with a clear position), Coherence and Cohesion (logical paragraphs and linking), Lexical Resource (range and accuracy of vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. An essay under 250 words loses marks for Task Response.