Write at least 250 words · 40 minutes
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Ideas to get you started
- Payments are quick and easy to track
- Older people and those without bank accounts may be excluded
- Risks of technical failures and online fraud
A plan for this question
- Introduction: paraphrase the trend and answer the question: the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, as long as cash stays available.
- Body 1 (disadvantages): older people and those without bank accounts left out; technical failures; online fraud.
- Body 2 (advantages, and why they weigh more): speed and convenience, every payment recorded, less cash handling and street robbery, small sellers able to accept payments; how the problems can be reduced.
- Conclusion: restate your answer and the condition.
Model essay
282 words
In many countries, cards and mobile phones have largely replaced cash, and some shops no longer accept coins and notes at all. In my view, the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages, as long as cash remains available for those who need it.
The drawbacks are real and fall mostly on vulnerable groups. Older people who are not confident with technology may struggle to use mobile payments, and people without a bank account, often those on very low incomes, can find themselves unable to pay for basic goods. Digital payments also depend on technology that can fail: when a bank’s system goes down or a phone battery dies, people may be unable to buy anything. Furthermore, criminals increasingly target online accounts, and victims of fraud can lose large sums very quickly.
Nevertheless, the benefits are greater. Digital payments are fast and convenient, so there is no need to carry cash or look for a cash machine, and paying by phone takes only a second. Every payment is recorded, which helps people track their spending and makes it much harder for businesses to hide income from the tax authorities. Shops save the cost and risk of handling large amounts of cash, and street robbery becomes less attractive when people carry little money. In India, for example, instant mobile payments have allowed even small street vendors to accept payments easily. The problems mentioned above can be reduced by keeping cash accepted for essential services and by improving security and consumer protection.
In conclusion, although a cashless society creates difficulties for some people and new opportunities for fraud, its speed, convenience and transparency bring greater benefits overall, provided that cash is not abolished entirely.
Written by Acedmi to show what a high-band essay looks like. It is not an official IELTS sample, and your own ideas can be different.
Useful vocabulary
- cashless
- Using cards or phones instead of coins and notes.
- “Many cafés are now completely cashless.”
- contactless payment
- Paying by touching a card or phone on a reader.
- “Contactless payment takes only a second.”
- vulnerable groups
- People more easily harmed, such as the elderly or the poor.
- “The change hits vulnerable groups hardest.”
- financial exclusion
- Not having access to banks and payment services.
- “A cashless society can cause financial exclusion.”
- fraud
- Illegally tricking people to get money.
- “Online fraud is rising.”
- transparency
- Being open, so that actions can be seen and checked.
- “Digital payments bring more transparency.”
- tax evasion
- Illegally not paying tax.
- “Recorded payments make tax evasion harder.”
- provided that
- Only if.
- “It is positive, provided that cash remains available.”
Common mistakes
- Only describing the technology. Explain who benefits and who is harmed.
- Forgetting to answer "outweigh". Your introduction and conclusion must say which side is greater.
- Hedging so much that the answer disappears. A condition such as "provided that cash remains" is fine, but your answer must still be clear.
What the examiner marks
Four criteria, equally weighted: Task Response (answer every part of the question with a clear position), Coherence and Cohesion (logical paragraphs and linking), Lexical Resource (range and accuracy of vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. An essay under 250 words loses marks for Task Response.